TWCL

[rafaribs]

Hey there!

I just made this 6-pages comic piece as my final assignment for a Graphic Novel class at my university. This is my first experience with comics, so I appreciate any feedback and I hope you guys like it!

nebulae.rafaribs.com

Thank you!

[SunScales]

Very cool, love the art.

Not sure how I feel about the narration covering several panels at a time. Messes with my perception of the time flow. But I really like the symmetrical layout throughout the story - especially the last two pages, where it really gives it a more spiritual feel.

The bigger god is super cute.

On the last page, is the dome that the mirror village supposed to be anything in particular?
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[rafaribs]

Thank you so much!

About the narration panels, I tried separating them mostly because of readability and I didn't notice that it could mess with the flowing of time in the story. I'm afraid I can't rethink and change that right now, but yeah, next time I'll consider that. Thank you for the advice!

The dome in the middle is supposed to be the planet's core. Composition wise, I put it there just to show that they have a "hole" in that place, something missing in the mirroring (since they don't have that giant stone god sitting by their side).

I'm glad you liked it!

[smbhax.com]

I like the art, especially the colors, and the layouts are interesting.

Pretty neat use of that tumblr theme, too.
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