Thank you so much!
About the narration panels, I tried separating them mostly because of readability and I didn't notice that it could mess with the flowing of time in the story. I'm afraid I can't rethink and change that right now, but yeah, next time I'll consider that. Thank you for the advice!
The dome in the middle is supposed to be the planet's core. Composition wise, I put it there just to show that they have a "hole" in that place, something missing in the mirroring (since they don't have that giant stone god sitting by their side).
I'm glad you liked it!