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supercerealoso



Joined: 25 Dec 2012
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:35 pm    Post subject: Not 'Super' At All Reply with quote

Hey! Sweet Reichel and I are doing a comic about what if SBBB characters were just normal guys in school. Here's a preview:





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MindChimera



Joined: 03 Feb 2013
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm a bit confused about Kid Icarus. He says he's new when he introduces himself to Ike, but then on the next page he's talking about going to Ike's class as if he knows his way around just fine.

The dialogue bubbles are pretty hard to see. I know you're trying to make them transparent to show more of the art, but you might want to make them a little more opaque. I'm having a hard time seeing where the tails are pointing.

It's very cute. Super Smash Bros. comics aren't really my thing any more, but good luck with your comic.
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supercerealoso



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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 5:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the recommendation! We're still on the process of finding the right transparency for the dialogue bubbles.
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