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mcmasters



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PostPosted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:31 am    Post subject: Write a Pete! Reply with quote

I'm finishing a "Tattoo" story arc. I've got a buffer of other stuff but haven't gotten to it because the tattoo thing kind of crept up on me and I keep finding things that (allegedly) are amusing regarding Todd's tattoo. I have comics for the next three, in which Todd realizes his chest tattoo is artificial, and then I move on to other things (buffer alert!) but I'm thinking there's room for a few last tattoo gags, and then I thought: why not see if anyone wants to pitch in.

Put it here in screenplay form or if you want shoot me a pm. I'll draw it and credit it to your site or yourself or whatever.

I can still slip in one at the point I am at now; everyone else knows Todd's tattoo is temporary but him, they are taking some delight in his defiant discomfort. Otherwise, it can be after he finds out.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The clock is ticking people...okay, so far, the leader in the clubhouse is the following, submitted by my dog:

Pete: Woof! Woof woof woof.

Susan: Woof? Woof.

Pete: Woof...grrrr...woof woof!

Susan: (eye roll) Woof.

(Then they sniff each other)

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Casual Notice
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 11:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

here's one for free wrote:

Panel 1
(Scene) Todd is contorting his body in what look to be painful ways. Audrey looks on, shocked.

Panel 2
(Scene): Same as panel one.
Audrey: What are you doing?
Todd: Nothing!

Panel 3
(Scene) same
Audrey: Are you...are you trying to make your tattoo animate like in the Popeye cartoons?
Todd: NO!

Panel 4
(Scene) Todd sags, defeated. Audrey walks past him to exit.
Todd: yes.
Audrey: I'm calling the dermatologist.

Panel 5
(Scene) Todd looks after her.

Panel 6
(scene) Todd goes back to contorting.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 4:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We have a winnah! Now I have to figure out how to draw Todd doing the breast-twitching thing. Audrey knows it's a temporary tattoo and will fade so she needs a different line in panel 4.

Will be comic 50, credited to "Casual Notice" at "SPQR" site unless otherwise directed. Thanks!

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 5:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heh. Nah, my site is Casual Notice. SPQR is a thing I do for a secret group that will soon rule the world. Like the Shriners but with fewer tiny cars.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2013 1:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm laughing my ass off drawing, or trying to draw, Todd, flexing his wicked tats as Audrey sneaks up behind him. I need to make the comic writing thing a regular feature.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Todd in all his pec-flexing glory: www.mcmasterscomics.com
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 10:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not to be a noodge, but there isn't a link where you say "his site is:".
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 2:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fixed. And now I know how to properly put links in the comments. (I'm way sadder than Pete)

And the reviews are in! Vaslittlecrow found Todd "repulsive" yet "mesmerizing!" Good call!
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